paper sky
Your yellow pencil
paints graphite stars
across a notebook paper sky
The faint mumbling
of your teacher's voice could be heard
But you're focused on the sky.
You're sitting in your mother's Toyota
Watching the moon follow you
all the way home from Grandma's house.
"Let's not fight in front of her."
You hear your mom plead with your dad.
But you're focused on the sky.
You're climbing your tree
That used to be Joey's,
whose handprints are still there.
Someone yells from afar
But you keep climbing higher
being focused on the sky.
You're up at the top
staring at the clouds,
noting their shapes.
A crack is heard, a break felt.
But you don't notice.
because you're too focused on the sky
I like this poem. The short lines and concise stanzas help the language to resonate, and the use of repetition is effective, especially in the end. Let's take a look at this one in class tomorrow, OK?
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